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Initial design for inside of a CD booklet. The band... Hometown Supersound. (myspace link here : [link]) Going to be be re-drawing the little houses sketch.. this is just an first go at it. Opinions? suggestions? :)

ps.. second version here [link]
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~Macchan Feb 26, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like this, specially the little buildings and the backdrop.:3 Personally though I'm kinda iffy about the choice of floor and then also the shadows.

Maybe instead you could do something with more defined shaped shadows with the grunge look that sort of mirrors the backdrop? Just a random idea... may look terrible.XP
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~melemel Feb 26, 2008  Professional
yes, the shadows i didnt take any care over in this. Youre right... better shadows!
This is all good.. getting useful opinions!
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:iconowlette:
It's pretty chill,really draws the eye in. I think the one thing you could do is to add a bit more of that blue to the background to create more balance. Otherwise nice job.
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~melemel Feb 26, 2008  Professional
thanks. i think the blue may go completely actually. i was just experimenting with overlaying different textures. But ill give your suggestion a try for sure..
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:iconowlette:
Ur welcome.either way I think the composition would work.
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